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Today’s poem only appeared early last
year, but I was unhappy with both title and poem in spite of encouragement from
friends to publish it here. Hopefully, readers will enjoy this version; I have
changed the title and completely revised the end couplet. (So why post a poem here
if I’m not entirely happy with it? Well, sometimes I am too close to the poem
to see rather than simply sense what is wrong or missing; this is, of course,
where any critical feedback comes into its own. (Academically, I didn’t do well
at school I the 1950’s/ early 60’s, but had some excellent teachers; one of the
most valuable lessons they taught me was to always face up to my shortcomings and
mistakes, even if only to myself.)
I dare say most if not all of us
have upset someone at some time or another with an accidentally inappropriate
choice of words. I can think of several occasions when it has happened to me,
and I’ve not always been able to mend fences with the person or persons
concerned. Some people are quick to take offence and slow to appreciate that it
well may be that no offence was intended.
Many years ago, I upset my
secondary school English teacher by a using poor choice of words. I apologised,
and explained I meant no offence. He accepted my apology, adding a word of
warning that has stayed with me these past 50+ years. “Never, but never,
underestimate word power, Taber. It can make or break or break any
relationship. More often than not, you’ll never understand why unless you make
the effort to find out. Even then, the chances are barely 50:50 that the other
person will have a clue what you’re on about and will proceed to hold a grudge
likely to prey on your mind for years. Most people, you see, forget that different
words mean different things to different people. As for the spoken word, well,
tone and body language are everything, and half the time we’re unaware how we
are using either.”
Oh, but he was so right,
and I have inadvertently found myself in that the same situation time and
again, not least because I am partially deaf . Believe me, though, those of us
who wear hearing aids are no more vulnerable to mishearing and/ or
misunderstanding than the average hearing person. Most of us who belong
to the former category can usually tell from the other person's tone or
expression that we have misheard and will act to prevent any misunderstanding.
Sometimes an apology-cum-explanation can clear the air, sometimes it won’t
stand a cat in hell’s chance of getting through to the offended person.
Language lays traps; it is always
worth remembering the old adage advising us to think before we speak (write,
e-mail, whatever) or risk its damaging the best of good intentions; its misuse
is a common enough mistake that most if not all of us make at some time or
another, grounds enough for appeal, surely, should we accidentally put a foot
wrong? Sadly, such is human nature that it is (too) often inclined to turn a
deaf ear.
This poem is a kenning
SOLDIERING ON
I’ll fight the good fight
with the very best of intentions,
yet often misunderstood
for a rogue devil in the detail,
invariably missed
by thought processes less familiar
with the subtler art
of meaning as regards prime
destination,
a sensitive mind-body-spirit
Losing the good fight
has been known to hurt those most
whose side I would take
against the harsher machinations
of life, love, whatever
it may be seemingly conspiring
to set us at worse odds
than mind-body-spirit intends, but
foiled
by its own commonest flaws
Winning the good fight
with the very best of intentions,
and getting the better
of some rogue devil in the detail
likely to throw a spanner
in the workings of any relationship
can be easily accomplished
for not assuming what’s good for
the goose
is good for the gander
I, Word Power, expert in the art of
persuasion,
nor less so in the nature of disillusion
Copyright R. N. Taber
2020